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Posted byu/[deleted]7 months ago
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Starting a blog for my startup

Just wrote my first blog post for my Social Media Marketing Consultancy, and was wondering what you guys think of it. Is it written well, is the direction good? Anything would help, thanks!

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Break up the post a little more by using titles and breaking down into more paragraphs - helps people read it and makes it more digestible. The title could use some work, I wouldn't suggest using a comma. I like the use of italics, bold, and caps to add flare - keep it up! Hit me up if you ever want me to read future posts as well.

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Agree. I’m using a phone to read the article and I think it’s not very phone-friendly. You can separate into more paragraphs with different sub headlines, and add some photos in between!

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1 point · 7 months ago

Thanks! Should I make the font smaller so its easier to read on mobile?

level 1

Looks good keep going.

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[deleted]
1 point · 7 months ago

The blog post is good but your site needs some work, change the social media icons to the side to point to your companies social media accounts (rather than wix), get the site to load faster, get your blog to be sparkconekt.com/blog/(postname) so people can easily remember and get to a post.

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[deleted]
1 point · 7 months ago

Thanks! What exactly do you mean by the social media icons? I checked the links for then all and they go to the proper social media

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[deleted]
2 points · 7 months ago

The ones on the sidebar don't go to your social media, see this image that shows your sidebar.

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[deleted]
1 point · 7 months ago

Ohhhh k. Thanks so much for pointing that out would have never noticed

level 1

Break up the post a little more by using titles and breaking down into more paragraphs - helps people read it and makes it more digestible. The title could use some work, I wouldn't suggest using a comma. I like the use of italics, bold, and caps to add flare - keep it up! Hit me up if you ever want me to read future posts as well.

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